Section: Acceptable Behavior and Harassment, #5
Changed:
... Moderate swearing is fine in guild, group and voice chat, however, it should be curtailed in public forums (e.g. - the general chat channel, etc.). ...
To:
... Moderate swearing is fine in guild, group and voice chat, however, it should be curtailed in public forums (e.g., the general chat channel, team chat, map chat, squad chat). ...
Reason: Typo (needed Oxford Comma) after "group". Comma needed, not a dash, after "e.g.". Four general chat channels exist, so they are named.
Section: Acceptable Behavior and Harassment, #6
Changed:
... appeal to a member of the High Council for help.
To:
... appeal to a member of the High Council for help.
Reason: Added link to guild structure page.
Section: Acceptable Behavior and Harassment, #8
Changed:
Begging will not be tolerated, whether within the guild, or in public chat channels. This reflects poorly on the guild, annoys other players, and tends to get you put on the ignore lists of others. Also, remember that just because another guild member is a higher level than you, that does necessarily not mean that they are always able to help you. Use common sense when asking for something. If money is being requested, you are obviously more-likely to get a loan from a friend who knows you. If you are new to the guild, it is probably best that you wait a while before asking for money from other members, unless you know them well.
To:
Begging will not be tolerated, whether within the guild or in public chat channels. This reflects poorly on the guild, annoys other players, and tends to get you put on the ignore lists of others. Also, remember that another guild member being a higher level than you does not necessarily mean that they are always able to help you. Use common sense when asking for something. If money is being requested, you are obviously more likely to get a loan from a friend who knows you. If you are new to the guild, it is probably best that you wait a while before asking for money from other members, unless you know them well.
Reason: Grammatical errors. No comma needed between "guild" and "or". Second sentence is more grammatically correct in the revised version. No dash necessary between "more" and "likely".
Section: Guild Participation and Use of This Web Site, #2
Changed:
... character profiles should be created for each character that a member owns ...
To:
... character profiles should be created for each character a member owns ...
Reason: Grammatical. The word "that" is not required.
Section: Guild Participation and Use of This Web Site
Combined #2 and #3 and removed part of #3.
Original:
2 - All members are expected to create a user account on this web site and keep their personal profile current (specifically, character profiles should be created for each character that a member owns). Guild communications are posted on this site, and we want a group of people serious about being in the guild. This does not mean that you have to visit the web site on a daily basis, but a general rule is that you visit at least once per week to see what's going on. An email address is all that is required when signing up for a user account. You can get one at Hotmail.com or Gmail.com, if you do not already have one.
3 - All guild members are expected to visit this web site on a semi-daily basis (every few days is sufficient), and check for guild-related announcements, which will also appear on the front page. If you prefer, we have RSS feeds of all the web site content, and you can subscribe to email notifications for various content types as well, by editing your user profile. It is strongly encouraged that you subscribe to guild announcements and be emailed each time we post a new one. Simply put: We make it easy to stay informed, so please do so.
Revised:
2 - All members are expected to create a user account on this web site and keep their personal profile current (specifically, character profiles should be created for each character a member owns). Guild communications are posted on this site, and we want a group of people serious about being in the guild. This does not mean that you have to visit the web site on a daily basis, but a general rule is that you visit at least once per week to see what's going on. Only an email address is required when creating a user account. You can get one at Gmail.com or Outlook.com, if you do not already have one. We also have RSS feeds of all the web site content, and you can subscribe to email notifications for various content types by clicking the "Subscriptions" tab on your user account. It is strongly encouraged that you subscribe to guild announcements and be emailed each time we post a new one. Simply put: We make it easy to stay informed, so please do so.
Reason: #3 came into conflict with #2. Revised version easier to read. Corrected grammatical errors. Added links where appropriate.
Section: Guild Participation and Use of This Web Site, #4
Removed the following.
... This sort of participation in the guild is also a good way to get yourself promoted to a higher rank.
Reason: There are only three guild ranks Member, War Councillor, and High Councillor). Promotion to either War Councillor or High Councillor is by nomination of a High Councillor and confirmation vote by the High Council.
Section: Grouping with Others, #1
Changed:
... This is especially important during dungeon runs ...
To:
... This is especially important during dungeon runs and raids ...
Reason: Raids have been added to the game.
Section: Grouping with Others, #3
Removed #3 entirely. It states:
Party members who have signed out of the game cannot be removed from parties. When signing out of the game, please leave the party you are in, or the remaining members will all need to leave the party and reform it after you have left.
Reason: Until it was fixed by the developer some time ago, party members could not be removed after they would log off. This is no longer an issue.
Section: Disciplinary Actions
Changed:
Violations of the rules will be addressed immediately by the High Council. ...
To:
Violations of the rules will be addressed immediately by the High Council. ...
Reason: Added link to guild structure page.
Section: Disciplinary Actions
Changed:
... either on the guild channel ...
To:
... either in the guild channel ...
Reason: It should be "in" not "on".
Section: Disciplinary Actions
Changed:
... so that you can forward the information you have collected, when you contact him or her. ...
To:
... so you can forward the information you have collected when you contact him or her. ...
Reason: No comma necessary.
Section: Disciplinary Actions
Changed:
... (whispers/tells) ...
To:
... (e.g., whispers) ...
Reason: "Whisper" is the appropriate Guild Wars 2 term. When the rules were written in early 2013, the game was new, and many players had come from other MMORPGs where "tell" was the term used. We included the word for clarity, but it is no longer necessary.
Section: Inactivity, Representation, and Removal from the Guild
Subsection: Representation, #3
Removed #3. It states:
When you are acting as an ambassador to the guild. These are guild members who are not in our guild but who work with us in World vs World.
Reason: Our guild used to exchange ambassadors with other guilds when text-based chat was the norm, prior to our server using voice chat and having commander chat on TeamSpeak available to us.
Section: The High Council
Changed:
The high council shall consist of seven total guild officers ("High Councillors"). ...
To:
The High Council shall consist of seven members ("High Councillors") except when there are vacancies. ...
Reason: Clarification; we've had fewer than seven members of the High Council due to vacancies. Also, capitalized the first letters of "high" and "council" and condensed the sentence to make it easier to read.
Section: The Privy Council
Changed:
... event organization (e.g., Structured PvP tournaments and Player vs Environment events) ...
To:
... event organization (e.g., PvP tournaments and player vs environment events) ...
Reason: Capitalization and the word "structured" are not required.
Section: The War Council
Changed:
... Please note that commanders (those members with the Commander's Compendium) must be logged into the voice chat server when they activate their commander tags ...
To:
... Commanders (those members with the Commander's Compendium) must be logged into the voice chat server when they activate their commander tags ...
Reason: "Please note" not necessary.
Section: Guild Ranks, Promotions, Demotions, and Removal
Removed entire section. It states:
To be written by the High Council at a future date.
Reason: Everything that would have been covered here has been covered in other sections.
Section: Voice Chat Server
Subsection: General Rules
Changed:
... Do not fight in open chat on the voice server. Take all arguments into private, game-based text chat. ...
To:
... Do not fight in open chat on the voice server. Take all arguments into private, game-based text chat or another appropriate voice chat channel where only those who are participating in the current discussion are present. Do not disturb others with your personal arguments. Take them into a more private setting and settle them in a courteous manner with those involved. ...
Reason: Clarification that personal arguments can be settled on TeamSpeak, but that they should be settled privately.